我們沒有在旁指導,只是見他的字體非常惡劣,才「指點」了幾句。他前後花了兩個半小時才完成這份習作,差點叫媽咪嘔血。但看見他投入的心機(字體除外),我們都感到很欣慰。
(注意:以下內容有暴力情節,敬請家長留意。)
Three Little Wolves
Written by: Jayson (P.3)
Once upon a time, there were three little wolves and their mother living in the farm. One day, their mother said "My wolves are growing bigger. You guys can take care of yourself? Can you go out for a camp by yourself?" And the wolves said "yes"
So they went to a forest to go camping and they each built a house for them to live in.
Wolf One built a house out of feathers. Wolf Two built a house out of leaves. Wolf Three built a house with mud underground.
When the wolves had finished, they yelled "WE FINISHED ALREADY!" But a bear heard them and went to the forest. He thought he could eat them.
When the bear went to Wolf One's house, Wolf One already went in his feather house. So the bear stretched his claws and broke Wold One's house. So, Wolf One ran to Wolf Two's house.
The bear jumped on a diving board and jumped through Wolf Two's house (because it was very soft). Wolf One and Wolf Two screamed and ran to Wolf Three's house. But they couldn't find the entrance. And so the bear ate Wolf One and Wolf Two. But Wolf Three was safe in his underground mud house.
Wolf Three heard Wolf One and Wolf Two yelled "Help!" and he took an axe and went to the bear's house. He went in but the bear had already slept. So, Wolf Three picked up his axe and cut opened his tummy. He found that Wolf One and Two didn't get hurt. The three wolves put some stones and rocks into the bear's tummy and ran away.
When the bear woke up, he was thirsty. He went to a river and drank water. The bear fell down into the river because the rocks and stones were too heavy. The bear was washed away. So, the three little wolves lived happily ever after.
~ Jayson
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